Hey, window here.
I liked this one better than the other one. Its the lyrics that do it. Holds true to reality. However, your written lyrics are different a little than you actually sing. Sounds pretty good. I'm not that strong at playing the guitar, but your flow sounds great. Take it easy.
Haha yeah, I tend to change lyrics a bit while I'm singing it.
And thanks for the comment! :D I appreciate it
should be about half as long as it really is.
What I would do is cut it from 4:30 in half using the intro and the transition there. Then end it with about 30% of the end you have.
I should really clear things up.
This track is NO where near finished. I'm pretty much making it for my mates party...so it just constantly plays the whole night. S'what he wanted. So it's not actually finished!
I plan to make it longer :D
haha
thanks for your imput
Good shiz
Needs more... outstanding instruments, I suppose. Its pretty good and I understand what you were going for though. Thats just my style, so I wont impose. you did good.
Sounds like
Sounds like an opening to a TV show. The beginning is a little repetitive, but as the song goes on it gets so much better. I like it.
I like it
It needs a quality update though. It would sound a lot better if things sounded a little clearer.
Yes. I'v been doing a little dicking around in audacity with it, but nothing that's helping very much.
chea
back at you.
intro was pretty good.
Sounded good too. 4/5. Get your boy off drugs.
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This is tech-dance at its best.
I love this song. Nothing makes me happier than hearing a song that sounds good, is well put together, and a great intro. You hit the nail on the head. Take it easy.
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