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Cocky applause... I would replace with a different instrument unless it was real. lol Otherwise, the rest of the song is pretty legit and nicely leveled in the headphones. May recommend reducing the reverb on your 1:50 synth to make the blopping string stand out more. . You may get a more crisp sound for a more solid tone. I like it a lot though.

MaSterAsSter responds:

The applause is your personal opinion. Personally, I don't think the song sounds as good without it. It's more like noise to fill in what would be boring. Besides, How often do you think people from newgrounds like myself would be able to stand in front of a crowd and get that kind of reaction? It's not exactly do-able.

As for the reverb, thank you. I moved recently and sadly, Lost the speakers I normally use and am now stuck with cheap ones. I can't really catch things like that on my own anymore. Maybe I'll be able to put the money out to get new speakers soon.

Could def see this in a movie. Nice on the leveling, length, and production.

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oh wow... lotta potential

harmonicacheese responds:

Why thank you :)

Sounds like your gonna need a sub under the bed. Hope your girl likes it man.

techwave responds:

LMFAO!!!

Techwave

Those symphonic instruments require a lot of volume swing patterns changing through Creating Automation Clips.

Nice proposal song.

I was a little impatient. I would make the whole ambient thing you did there a separate track, and just start the song at 1:25. then in the song where the vocalist comes in is the ..drop.. I guess.. It pushes all your good stuff and music to a spot where it'll be less likely to be heard.

Ragamuffin responds:

You have some good points, but being up-front and accessible is no longer an issue to me.

I wanted to do something with this song. You did a good job on it! Turn her up a little bit though. It's not leveled out right in the phones, I don't feel.

2024 edit: Sounds great all these years later lol Good work

OcularNebula responds:

thanks!

well, I didn't want the samples to overpower all the other elements, but I might turn her up just ever so slightly

Add some drums, yo.

Aphyrmehrius responds:

did it

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